I took the long way round
cause I don’t want to forget
everything I’ve done today
everything we did
I took the long way round
cause I don’t want to let go
of the somethings and the everythings
we made and wished for and know
Fast and frisk, brisk and breathy
I show myself a way to live
Past the canyons and the valleys
and wondering what I have to give
Smooth and steady, gentle and slow
I capture how it feels to be alive and awake
Drawing lazy circles in a path of color,
sunlight gives life and the world takes
Running with the wind is exhilarating
but this sunset drive is a memory
Light and sweetness, peaceful endings
pouring through my eyes into me
I took the long way round
cause I don’t want to forget
everything I’ve done today
everything we did
I took the long way round
cause I don’t want to let go
of the somethings and the everythings
we made and wished for and know
I liked
this!
well penned piece,
but the flow skips a place or two...
otherwise,
i especially like your stanza to begin and end
a classy poem!
thanks,
Koko
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
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