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Rainy Night.
Coal black shadows,
in puddled street
amber lit, by
reflecting pools.
Dreary drips from
rooftop's shine
catching glints
from hurried feet.
Halo'd light of
lamp led glow,
washes down the
river'd road.
Shop fronts bright
with sun's disguise
throws false warmth
to path below.
Dampened coats
stand in a row,
to patient wait
for bus to load.
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i liked the rythum on this one i`m not here much just put everything i write here for a home page
and for copy rights spend most of my poetry time on writers cafe you are welcome to join
ron parrish
Hi, I'm glad you liked it,
Hi, I'm glad you liked it, thank you. No wonder I haven't seen your work as much, like you I am not here quite as often. I am with UKAuthors mainly as many are professional writers and give very helpful and constructive feedback on a more technical level, I have learnt a lot from them. :-) sweetwater.
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good for you ,i don`t really care about comments i write for the love of it
don`t expect to be a famous author
ron parrish
I think you are right.
I think you are right. Although my writing itself has improved, because I am now so conscious of critique I worry too much about what others will think, and that really has destroyed much of the enjoyment of writing, its confidence sapping.
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well come to writers cafe . org we are easy and polite
you will love it
ron parrish
Many thanks will give it a
Many thanks will give it a look :-) x