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"Flamed Butterfly"
Spread your wings and fly she said.
So the beauty flew with in the blaze.
Never let the ugly make you cry she said.
So the beauty flew into her maze.
The Trust became a definate.
And the beauty began to fade.
And she took back what she made.
She said never take anything for granted.
And the flames destroyed her ability to fly.
The flames spoke again except for forgiveness.
Butterfly all hurt and betrayed spoke the words back.
It said never take anything for granted.
The trust became an indefinate.
Flames move back and forth forever with rage.
And butterflys fly safe in no ones hands.
Flamed butterfly:
Your poem describes well the trust and lifespan of the butterfly, and it learning not to trust the human.
Fine writing but a little sad, I liked your poem.
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