Just when you thought you were burning bright, you burned down into a transmuting puddle of wax its soft, smooth tendrils beginning to solidify into grotesque and lovely forms on a cluttered desk where there's a notice board to which a hodgepodge of angels and memories are pinned with melted thumbtacks
and you're looking at old Polaroid photographs
ribbons
achievements
fingersmooth paper
and a key that unlocks your old diary
where the pages aren't stained with blood
but with dirt from overeager fingers
touching everything with wondered eyes
like it was all a new experience
and in a way it was as though you could see through a transparent world except you were really just staring into the infintismal reflection of a hundredth of a thousandth of life that was yours, the other fraction hidden from your view, and in a way you're still doing the same thing: sitting in a cardboard box and thinking you know the universe.
I really like this! :) You have an interesting writing style.
stephen!!oh my goodness this is so profound,i havent rad one that expressed this so perfectly in along time!you never disappoint me in poetry!always to the extreme to the limit, i damire you for that!!
~guinevere~
Something in this made me cry. I am digging you man.