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Skin Queen
They've seeded the belief in minds far
and w i d e
that you're no more than a wet dream fantasy
grinning laughing
frowning crying
that you're whatever made-up
peep-show, adolescent, late-at-night
dirty girl, open-mouthed, worthless
sopping, dripping, naked
object of desire
that they choose for you to be
but i looked into your pixellated eyes
as you were sucking up next month's cheque
and i made a startling discovery
that your mind was one million miles away
on horseback rides on summer days
and sunrise walks down quiet paths
and cleansing yourself in bubble baths
on a babe in your arms, fast asleep
and beautiful things that are yours to keep
on love that doesn't require you gagging and bound
spoken and blessed without making a sound
then i felt like i knew you
that a common binding thread connected us
on some less thought-upon plane
and i knew what it was:
you're no-one's fucking skin queen
you're a human being
this is me wide eyed in wonder, i am amazed. this was not only well written, but you spat out great meaning along with those words.
Stephen,omg,i really feel you on this one,people are so callous and heartless sometimes!you expressed this in an amazing way,i believe its truth the world needs to hear.ill get back to you soon on that last email.i havent been able to get on at all lately(my dads laptop!argh lol)
~angry flowers~
~*Guinevere*~
(Even though I dont like the last sentence)the whole thing made me feel horrible.
-regarding that: Good job.
beautiful for again lack of better words, i know you get sick of hearing it, but it's true. it's beautiful, elegantly stated adn very deep and the meaning you kinda have to search for and i liek that. very well done. keep writing. read my new ones. non exsistant adn ever thought of that adn whhat ever else you haven't readluv yas. keep postin.