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Astronomy: A Lesson in Love
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Te Amo (Love, Love) Mercury never strays from the sun
You never leave my heart for a spell
In the morning sky there is chaos
A thousand different hues of blue
Permeated by the emerging orange light
And a tiny faithful star
That does not waver from the distance
Until the night's canvas is afire
In brilliance outshining the smile on my face
And therein lies the dichotomy
Mercury never strays from the sun
You never leave my heart for a spell
This is so beautiful. You're an amazing writer. You should come check out our message board, A Stab At Poetry. It's new, but we've got some talented people, and you'd be a great addition. You've got a lot of talent. Good luck with your writing in the future.
LaRae
In the more than three decades that I have been reading poetry, this is one of the most beautiful love poems I have ever read!
Starward
Stephen,really cool way to express love!you think of things in a really strange(a.k.a wicked sweet)way!
~celestial flowers~
~*Guinevere*~
beautiful poem