I'm just the ashes of the Ides of March
so softly blown away
I'm just the skeleton of frailty
so mightilly fallen
I was a king, I was a god,
I was a humble wife
Of memories held like icicles from my
red rimmed eyes
The tide begins its march of soldiers
all on parade
The clock it moves its weary hands
to the piper's beat
I was a king, I was a god
I was an aching slave
To memories pressed like cold blades
to my cream white skin
All has transpired and what it is
will always be
I hear the Ides of March faint echoes
on the wind
Never a king, Never a god
Always obliging servant
For the memories sharp like broken glass
against the palms of my hands
wow...and yet again i am in awe...dahaang!how do u do it?
i loved it. very touching. and it made me think which makes good a great poem even better. i never know what to write on critquies for your poems becasue they make me so speachless after i read them. very nicly done. beautiufl.
p.s: i have new poems up.
This is really good. I'm not sure of your meaning of it but I think it's more about what we want to be but when we face reality, we were never that at all. So keep up the good work. Buh-byez!