I miss you momma
I never knew u well
All I really remember
Is your scream and then a yell
U would go upstairs
Tears in ur eyes
One day I went up
And figured out ur lies.
You said u were fine
Just extremely tired
Those were all lies
We saw the gun, and the shots were fired
All I remember is the shock in ur eyes
and my mind telling me everything will be fine.
but nothing is ever fine, is it
my mind always takes me back to you mum
And when I saw u and that gun.
I waited for hours,
on and on,
till I finally realised
you were gone.
where are you mum?
when I needed u the most
u left me
then I overdosed
I
dig the darkness of this.
inspired by real events?
i hope not.
particular use of the couplet in verse is a good device.
more?
Gun
Thank you so much. It's not based on real events, if somebody has to live this traumatizing life I'd feel extremely upset. Thanks, every comment means a lot to me!