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It was the 4th of December

I TOOK THE TIME TO FIGURE WHAT I REQUIRED

GOT TO KNOW YOU AND YOURE WHAT I DESIRED

I FELL HARD AND QUICK

AS IF YOU WERE HAND PICKED

THE JOY I FELT BEING WITH YOU

I KNEW I WOULD NEVER FEEL BLUE

IT WAS THE 4TH OF DECEMBER.

THAT MUCH I CAN REMEMBER.

YOU SAID WE NEEDED TO SPEAK.

MY BODY BEGAN TO FEEL WEAK

YOURE FEELINGS YOU WERE EXPLAINING

AND MY EMOTIONS I WAS CONSTRAINING

NOW THAT YOURE GONE AND AWAY

MY WORLD HAS BECOME COLD AND GREY

WITH ONE LITTLE LIGHT OF HOPE

I AM FINDING IT HARD TO COPE

WHEN I SEE YOU YOURE A BEAUTIFUL SWAN

WHICH MAKES IT HARD TO CARRY ON

I BEG TIME TO MAKE MY FEELINGS LEAVE

BUT NIGHT AFTER NIGHT I SIT ALONE AND GRIEVE

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This was my first poem so be easy on me. It's really hard to have feeling that wont go away, the girl this is about I truly cared about. I spent two years avoiding relationships to do a tremendous amount of deep thinking to figure out and create(in my mind) the girl for me. When I got to know her I knew she was right for me!! But I guess I wasn't right for her...

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last updated 3 August 2012 - 9:56am
©2 August 2012 - 11:49am — Stkelly72888
9 August 2012 - 7:54am — Juggalette....MCL
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this is actually a very good

this is actually a very good poem for you first one!!!!!! everything flowed quite well.... honestly my poems are mostly from when i was like 15 years old haha.... but what makes a good poem is the actual feelings of the author....and this my friend is definately a good poem!!!!!! keep up the good work i woul definately like to see more posts soon!!!!