So Rises The Old Woman From The Sea

She speaks beyond the tempest in the tea

pot, in a most elliptic, broken mutter,

which---like the shadows lurking behind a shutter---

conveys a foreboding sense of inanity,

worth no more than the shrill profanity

that can be overheard in any gutter.

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Ominous and breathtaking,

Ominous and breathtaking, this portrait emerges from an atmosphere of mystery "like the shadows lurking behind a shutter" and pathos . We hear a tragic, demented voice and we can't turn away. So many questions swirl in six power-packed lines and yet they don't. Somehow we know, and that is the magic of your artistry.

 

These are the remnants of a life, achingly sad as they are chilling. 

 

Outstanding description and one hell of a title. 

 

 

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Thank you so much.  I had

Thank you so much.  I had hoped it would sound like a "haunted" poem, and I appreciate your understanding of it.


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