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Not Like The Noble Gasses

Some elements are designated as the Noble Gasses.

But when foul flatulence, after a cabbage roll lunch, passes

out of me to the wider air, its stench---sharply emphatic---

can never be considered (not at all!) aristocratic.

 

Starward

 

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last updated 2 September 2021 - 5:21am
©2 September 2021 - 4:31am — J-9thxciv
3 September 2021 - 9:53am — SSmoothie
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Haha! Id disagree but the

Haha! Id disagree but the poem is certainly worth a few chuckles! A fun read! Ss

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

3 September 2021 - 8:59pm — J-9thxciv
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Thank you very much for those

Thank you very much for those words.

J-9th94

2 September 2021 - 4:37pm — patriciajj
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Noble Gasses. I feel like I

Noble Gasses. I feel like I shouldn't laugh, but I did. I imagine this being read in a pseudo-stately voice as dry humor. Royally funny. 

2 September 2021 - 7:05pm — J-9thxciv
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Thank you.  I had been

Thank you.  I had been reading about the other elements---in preparation for the Whole Galaxies Of Thought poem---and this quatrain kind of sneaked into my mind, with the demand Write me!

J-9th94

3 September 2021 - 9:29am — patriciajj
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Glad you obeyed the demand.

Glad you obeyed the demand. Cheered me up on a grueling day.