Not Like The Noble Gasses

Some elements are designated as the Noble Gasses.

But when foul flatulence, after a cabbage roll lunch, passes

out of me to the wider air, its stench---sharply emphatic---

can never be considered (not at all!) aristocratic.

 

Starward

 

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SSmoothie's picture

Haha! Id disagree but the

Haha! Id disagree but the poem is certainly worth a few chuckles! A fun read! Ss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

S74rw4rd's picture

Thank you very much for those

Thank you very much for those words.


Starward

patriciajj's picture

Noble Gasses. I feel like I

Noble Gasses. I feel like I shouldn't laugh, but I did. I imagine this being read in a pseudo-stately voice as dry humor. Royally funny. 

S74rw4rd's picture

Thank you.  I had been

Thank you.  I had been reading about the other elements---in preparation for the Whole Galaxies Of Thought poem---and this quatrain kind of sneaked into my mind, with the demand Write me!


Starward

patriciajj's picture

Glad you obeyed the demand.

Glad you obeyed the demand. Cheered me up on a grueling day.