Nero In The Gardens

. . . even now are there many antichrists . . .

---1 John 2:18


A lot of torch light during a slow burn---

quite economic (even I discern

that):  Christians squirm and writhe when set to flame,

because they have questioned---defied---denied---

the glory of my skilled, artistic fame

that I, as Imperator, have proclaimed

(and I congratulate me, unashamed).

Poetic skill and godhood crown my name.

Those ancient scrolls---dusty, unread, and rotten

with worms and mites---will be ever forgotten;

along with Vergil (verbose faggot) too.

Throughout the whole empire, both far and wide,

my epic verses will have dominated;

and readers will gaze on my lines with looks

of admiration---fished caught with hooks

deftyly, adroitly, masterfully baited.

Voices in my head---when awake, asleep

(they have made me the lair in which they lurk)---

assure me that my first and foremost work

is the expression of my own heartseep.


Starward

[*/+/^]


Author's Notes/Comments: 

 

The emperor Nero believed he was the supreme artist of his era, and in history.  His lack of verbal skill was apparent to everyone but himself; and he kept busy by reminding any and all of his fame, his ability to turn a phrase, and the profound worth of the strings of words that he called poetry.

 

To give this poem a metafictional tone, I have used a couple of contemporary terms---Nero's parenthetical opinion of Vergil; and the last word of the last line.

 

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Diamond_Wills_New_War's picture

Well done, well

Well done, well written.
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Self awareness is a useful trait, one Nero probably had in short supply. I know very little of him or of Rome really but I enjoyed your poem, had to read out loud so I could really experience it.


Long days and pleasant nights

Diamond

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This is one of the finest,

This is one of the finest, and I do mean FINEST, compliments that I have ever received here at postpoems or elsewhere.  And, coming from you, it is especially meaningful to me.  At the moment, I am experiencing an embarrassing loss of words, hence the shortness of my response.  I am overwhelmed with gratitude.


Starward