Footnote: The Revenant Friends

Even his friends, those

revenants, find him only

useful for ghastly

hauntings.  Even they despise

his flat personality.


Kyakuchuu

Author's Notes/Comments: 

After the second line of the last senryu in Dalton's poem, "Senryu."

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This is comical. Ain't it

This is comical.

Ain't it great how we can shame

but only with grace.


bananas are the perfect food

for prostitutes

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Thank you for your comment,

Thank you for your comment, and in the form of a Senryu as a bonus!


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