God spare us from the multiplied gerund ending---
which on our verbs are relentlessly descending
to rob them of action that is emphatic,
and make the poems more impotently static.
Starward
Amen! A devastatingly clever invocation.
Thank you. After reading a poem that was all gerund endings, and contorted sentences, with the verbs repeatedly hamstrung, I could not resist writing this. Thanks again for commenting.
J-Called
Amen! A devastatingly clever
Amen! A devastatingly clever invocation.
Thank you. After reading a
Thank you. After reading a poem that was all gerund endings, and contorted sentences, with the verbs repeatedly hamstrung, I could not resist writing this. Thanks again for commenting.
J-Called