Risen To High Noon---A Tanka For Patriciajj

Risen to high noon

over Poetry's vast realm,

the cosmic cluster

of your poems shines---for seasons

and signs---as God has meant them.

 

Kyakuchuu

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Thw fourth and fifth lines allude to Genesis 1:14.

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A torrent of grandeur in just

A torrent of grandeur in just a sprinkle of words. The allusion to God's celestial creations was humbling and striking. Coming from such a gifted wordsmith, I'm deeply moved and forever grateful. 

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Thank you very much.  It is

Thank you very much.  It is always a pleasure to write about your poetry---in comments or in poems!


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