Tanka For Patriciajj, About Her Poems

Your poems are sturdy

boats upon the river that

is time---harnassing

its current to convey us

further than our own steps go.

 

Kyakuchuu

 

aka

 

Januarian

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Your poems accomplish this

Your poems accomplish this important mission as well. Thank you for your supportive words, rendered magical in an eloquent metaphor. 

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Thank you.  I cannot really

Thank you.  I cannot really take credit for this poem, as it came together, without planning on my part, after hearing the Sibelius Andante.  But it is entirely accurate, trying to describe the cosmic river that flows through your poetry.


Starward

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