Gratitude To Patriciajj

A line of your verse freed me from that which beset
me for so long in petulance and bitterness

toward my old flame, Karina, now Lady Chausette;

the joy she gave me, I admit, was more not less

than what I was, beforehand, able to express.

The anger I once felt for nearly forty years

has been exchanged for gratitude replacing tears.

Your kind of poetry does not chide, but refines

the reader:  so much cosmic power in your lines.

 

Starward

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I'm overwhelmed with

I'm overwhelmed with gratitude and amazement that you took the time to first, look so deeply into my compositions, and second, wrote this luminous, honest and gracious verse about your journey from pain to liberation. I'm thrilled to have been a part of your epiphany.

 

The way I see it is you deserve every blessing because you've have been a tremendous blessing to many. 

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Thank you for your kindness

Thank you for your kindness and encouraging comment.  Your words, in poems and comments, have become such vital helps to me in this difficult time.


Starward