Poem With Declarative Premises

I commend the style of epic or epyllion---

though certain flaccid, flabby poets fear it---

because it speaks to cosmic yearning of the spirit.

Whereas the style called doggerel,

speaks enough to the decrepit soul

that, in self-pity, wallows

in the stagnant shallows

that pool in its uncharted hollows,

mostly empty and never even half full.

 

Starward

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patriciajj's picture

Truly enjoyed this

Truly enjoyed this thought-provoking, intelligent commentary only an accomplished student of literature could write, and yes, it's true cosmic minds  (you being one) would gravitate towards the epic style. A testament to your mastery of form and language. 

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Thank you.  I was not sure of

Thank you.  I was not sure of this poem at first, but your comment has validated it for me.  Sending you a PM to explain a little further.


Starward