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Footnote: Down At The Old Home Place
At the old home place,
mossy slab-shaped rocks lead, like
steps, to the creek's edge:
beneath your jeans' flared cuffs, your
eager stockinged feet descend.
Kyakuchuu
[jlc]
At the old home place,
mossy slab-shaped rocks lead, like
steps, to the creek's edge:
beneath your jeans' flared cuffs, your
eager stockinged feet descend.
Kyakuchuu
[jlc]
Central To The Whole
"descend" another vignette, a videoed memory. "edge" is equal to "hem" - "lead" is equal to "eager" and more loosely - steps/descend - slab-shaped/stockinged - rocks/skirt. Balanced images thay are thematically intrinsic to unity. Fun to examine sound qualities that evolve from tone to mood. Cool writings - allet -
Thank you for that careful
Thank you for that careful analysis. I appreciate the time you spent to sort all that out.
Seryddwr
Very nice, I really enjoyed
Very nice, I really enjoyed reading this :-) Sue.
Thank you very much. I am
Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your kind words.
Seryddwr