You knocked me off my feet again and you werent even there.

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You knocked me off my feet again and you werent even there.

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thought of you today.

and a whole world of passion opened up

one I hoped against hope had died.

I tried to walk away graciously carving a new life

I did my best not to look back

but the ghost of you still catches my breath

there are too many yesterdays between us

not enough tomorrows

and an infinite array of could have beens

this is a raw and honest heartfelt union

a law this world can not abide by

so I crave the next world.

where this love on the wind

blows true and that this higher love

has no boundaries between me and you

there is no end between us.

to think such is an intollerable thought

there is only eternity where we wait

impatiently to claim eachother's souls.

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last updated 16 December 2013 - 10:57pm
©16 December 2013 - 6:38am — SSmoothie

27 February 2014 - 9:19pm — Prince1995

You knocked me off my feet.

You knocked me off my feet. well said

1 March 2014 - 1:41pm — SSmoothie

oh thankyou Prince1995~

Long time no see! Have you written anything lately? I might go and have a looksee...

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

11 February 2014 - 3:43am — darkpool

Very nice, Smoothie, love

Very nice, Smoothie, love eternal if love can wait till eternity...

My Secret River

1 March 2014 - 1:42pm — SSmoothie

thankyou Dark pool! :D

its about time I checked out your folder! if Only I could remember everyone,but I do certainly whenever I see you, all of you on line, I have a look through! hugss

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

2 February 2014 - 8:28am — Daniel-59

Well Hell this one hit Me

Well Hell this one hit Me where No Man wants to be hit ...in the heart !

thought of you today.

and a whole world of passion opened up

one I hoped against hope had died.

I tried to walk away graciously carving a new life

I did my best not to look back

but the ghost of you still catches my breath

I don't know about the graciously part

But the rest fit like the proverbial Glove

~ D D ~

P.S. Had to throw it into the circle

Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

2 February 2014 - 10:47am — SSmoothie

I see what you did there bro and i love you for it. I love you more because you told me why and now this poem is a more special poem than it was before and that was pretty special. its from my heart and if it speaks the language of heart then I am glad it is understood. perhaps there is hope for mankind if we can do that for everything else. Your poetry catches my breath and if I had never discovered it I wouldnt have wanted to share my truth or my heart in the way I do now. I credit a few wonderful gentlemen on this site for that you my dear tbro are certainly one of the finest! big warm heart sized (my heart sized) hugss!

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

2 February 2014 - 10:49am — SSmoothie

PS IT IS SUPPOSED TO BE

PS IT IS SUPPOSED TO BE UNGRACIOUSLY BUT HEY SPELL CHECKER UNCHECKED IT. :( SO THERE YOU GO :)

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

2 February 2014 - 5:04am — running_with_rabbits

:(

too close to home and at the right 'wrong' moment in my emotions to do anything but be bitter with every single word! F*ck waiting F*ck the next world....

:( I think this poem got to me more than I wanted it too...

Much Love

Ashley

2 February 2014 - 5:39am — SSmoothie

it gets better I promise,

it gets better I promise, till then, fuck all the bad shit all you want. its not to forget its just to help me learn to live a better life and love a better way and a better thing. though I am thinking to myself its all bullshit. fuck waiting fuck the next world...! hugss

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

3 February 2014 - 5:28am — running_with_rabbits