Chunks of red

It seems you've managed to gouge out another chunk of my heart 

took your time to make me feel it, every bit of it

Wormed those fingers of pain right in 

down to nauciously scraped nerves

dug in deep 

mustve been so pissed to find it was hollow?

Oh sweety, with your forhead planted in your palms

You look so lost?

Didn't think of the cost did you? 

Oh how well in our misery we soak 

one day king of hearts; next day broke! 

you didn't think id let it go so easily did you?

 

I have a habit of scaping the mess under my nails

love is such a gruesomely pretty colour

Cheer up 

I feel so much better

now that I've taken a good chunk of yours.

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Poetic_Eyes's picture

Intense

Intense with imagery, emotion, raw honesty. At some point, everyone has been broken hearted and felt like their heart was ripped from their chest and shoved down their throat. Time does help heal the pain, but your emotions purges through your fingertips to write an amazing poem. 

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My dearest pwings you make my

My dearest pwings you make my heart flutter with your wonderful words and your encouragement! Deeply thankful! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Awesome and chunky. I like

Awesome and chunky. I like those big ones.

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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I lost this poem 3 times due

I lost this poem 3 times due to line drop out... Its all I could remember  :/ but it's fixed as best as I could now. Thanks nightlight hugss x


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."