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CUNTISM How many flatlines before it stays flat?
You need me?
and what do I need?
Youre sorry?
So am I,
for not being strong enough to carry the both of us.
Do NOT rescusitate.
The whys are over so dont keep trying.
That wasn't my heart thump;
that was the door...
Please continue pasting your irritation on readers Respected SS
Please continue pasting your irritation on readers Respected SS.Who was at the door? A scene from a thriller? Let the intruder "die" what's the need to revive him/her? Obviously the burden was too heavy.Must admit Respected SS, very difficult post to comprehend !! Maybe another dimension to my today's poem "Tears" .My sailboat's oar has rotted . Must fetch a new oar to steer it.
©bishu
Thank you bishu! Yes this is
Thank you bishu! Yes this is difficult it jumps from metaphorical to literal in a heart beat! Excuse the pun dear, it symbolises closure and exceptence of something one can not change but not live with either. I will read "tears" bishu and I will let you know hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
oh smoothie this one has such
oh smoothie this one has such an impacting ending! I could fele the anger, and not een anger more the just done, like no nager, no sorrow, just done I am out that is it thank you very much good bye!
I feel the way some of the lines are broken up takes away from the impact a bit, but I always feel that way about seperating lines which feel like the same sentence
Much Love
Ashley
Point taken wabbits dear, is
Point taken wabbits dear, is this better? However I do tend o pause a lot, adding drama to words... I guess also An influence of the greatly esteemed poppy :) she was one hell of a good write. But then so are you ;) hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
:)
I sure do miss her sometimes, I always loved her poetry
and thanks, you're not to shaby yourself kiddo
Much Love
Ashley
Wake up
Let that rhythmic beat keep thumping, cuz we all need our SSmoothie :)
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
Lol! Thumping it is but who
Lol! Thumping it is but who for? ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Who for?
Why all of your loving and adoring postpoemie fans.
You're partners in chryme.
Those of us who breathe your words, and let the ink run freely through our veins.
And then, there's the kids. ;)
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
you RoC my world baby! ;D
you RoC my world baby! ;D hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
"Not Gonna Die, Tonight" Right?
"The last thing I heard, was you whispering goodbye
And then I heard you flatline"
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
Soul food! Love you RoC!
Soul food! Love you RoC! Always there when I need you! ;) tightest hugss and respect always Ss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."