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Your mediocrity reeks of brilliance.
If I could prick the tip of my finger
with the passionate flood of your eloquence,
burn my heart with the truth of your fire,
pierce my soul with your determined spirit
so that remnants of your essence held fastened
to my rough edges; maybe, just maybe
I could be close to where you are.
Your mediocrity flaunts it's self
with out a care in the world
it speaks so deep it tears holes in my emotions.
Yet, frivolously you toss heart scrawls like crumbs
that I can't seem to follow like forgotten dreams,
I want to speak your heart language
commune with your soul to capture you
with brilliance that shines,
But even at the furtherest tip of your rays
I feel so far away.
Jeez!
Simply exquisite! I've felt & said this so much more clumsily so many times on PP and you absolutely nailed it!!!
Clumsy? You? Not my prince in
Clumsy? You? Not my prince in eloquent armour, ;D hugss you light up my night b! Love ya!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
another piece that is fucking
another piece that is fucking brilliant as always
ssmoothie for prez
Love ya too my dear
Love ya too my dear treesaredeceased!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
ssmoothie...
ssmoothie...intense with emotion, vivid with expression, passionate with poetic talent, and brillant.
My dearest poetic eyeou how
My dearest poetic eyeou how you make me swoon with your lovely and kind words my lovely! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
<3 <3 <3 Thanks Dovely,
<3 <3 <3
Thanks Dovely, inkstain an healing woman you are all poets I enjoy reading and friendships with! :) hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
My! every word may just as
My! every word may just as easily be reversed and reflected. Great write!
Inks, your comments are short
Inks, your comments are short but so concisely sweet! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
You know what I admire about
You know what I admire about you, smoothie? Your sharp. I love your eyesight. And always you are an inspiration to me! Love this piece.
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Awwww HW. As you are to me
Awwww HW. As you are to me darl! Hugss :D
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Oh SSmoothie...youhave really
Oh SSmoothie...youhave really outdone yourself here, in my opinion. This captures so succinctly what is felt when something 'slips through their fingers'. I like it because it has a more 'earhty' resonance, and is not so 'off in space', dealing with the feeling in a more real and raw way.
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
thanks sweet, gtg real busy,
thanks sweet, gtg real busy, but I will be back to thouroughly catch up with you all tonight! Promise! :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."