Two moon junction (scribble naughts moon theories)

Two beautiful moons,
galaxies apart
Turning circles
held there
by the obligations of gravity
But one ever seeks the other.
Sensing they are destined;
They feel the pull of the other
Through the void of spaces.
In their endless revolutions each
Counting the twinkle of the stars,
down to the one Lunar turn
when they align paths
only seconds to Tell
of a universe of love
in that moonbeam,
eclipsing Each others spaces,
their refractions touch.
Particles of moonbeams close enough
to mingle in each others high hopes,
but the universe has
its own time scape
At least as they drift,
further from the rings of their bounds
Each endless cycle,
drifts them closer to their hearts;
and on that glorious night

when their hearts collide 
the universe will see

a brilliance of love 
To eclipse every sun.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Moon theories 

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Lookng through my anthology i

Lookng through my anthology i live this one best. X 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Gosh I want to get back to

Gosh I want to get back to writing like this. *sigh* just so busy! Too darn busy to think pretty or clever... 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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And all the rest...

And all the rest...


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Always expect the best, but

Always expect the best, but believe you me, prepare yourself for the worst! lmao. This is great, SSmoothie!

...............


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Thanks night light this is

Thanks night light this is one of my all time faves! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Fabulous! 

Fabulous! 

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Thanks impy! :D hugss 

Thanks impy! :D hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Ovation line: " a universe of

Ovation line: " a universe of love
in that moonbeam,
eclipsing Each others spaces,
their refractions touch.
Particles of moonbeams close enough
to mingle in each others high hopes, "

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Thanks iInkstain :) I'm glad

Thanks iInkstain :) I'm glad you approve! This one is a bit special! Cheers SS 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Beavis's picture

Simply WOW!!!

Amazing!!! I love it! So beautiful with such great imagery, but these lines, oh wow! "close enough
to mingle in each others high hopes,
but the universe has
its own time scape
At least as they drift,
further from the rings of their bounds
Each endless cycle,
drifts them closer to their hearts"
HugSS!!!

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Nope wasn't wow enough and

Nope wasn't wow enough and wel... Sonic e you commented I just had to tweak it! ;) deepest thanks for your encouragement and affliction! Lol! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

darkpool's picture

As they get closer, their

As they get closer, their shapes will distort ever more due to gravity, till they are torn into pieces. Eventually they will coalesce, but something will be lost. maybe their individuality.

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And something new and

And something new and incredible born! ;)  


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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two moon junction

noice

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Thankyou darvid, I am a

Thankyou darvid, I am a little romantic at heart! ;) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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xp

and a freak between the sheets!

hahaha. <3


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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Hahahaha! Shhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! 

Hahahaha! Shhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Sealed


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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Mwah bia for you it's our secret ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Pssh...


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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OMG!!!!! No you didn't!!!!!

OMG!!!!! No you didn't!!!!! LMAO!!!!! 

Pparty rock... Cant trump it Lol! Gtg my son stepped on a nail :( 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

ashes_theartofburning's picture

GASP!

Oh, No!

Tetanus Shot!

I hope he's okay!!
(HUGS!)


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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Yep I hope it's just that, I

Yep I hope it's just that, I jucal got the call. :( on may way! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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It's alright folks, the kid

It's alright folks, the kid is okay! His parent is a legend! ;) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

ashes_theartofburning's picture

hahaha!

he was too sexy for that nail was what it was!


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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Yeah took the shot like a man

Yeah took the shot like a man he certainly nailed it! ;x 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Heavenly!

Heavenly!

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Thanks! Cheers SS 

Thanks! Cheers SS 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Omg updating comments is

Omg updating comments is fixed!!!! YEAHY!!! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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More comments than reads lol!

More comments than reads lol! I guess the videos say it all! Lol! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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This reads and flows like the

This reads and flows like the perfect whirlwind. You've outdone yourself with this bit of magical lure.

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Oh my, thankyou cevance! Your

Oh my, thankyou cevance! Your work is such a high calibre your encouragement has me chuffed! I'm tickled pink! :D


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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I was reading..

Last night, and this made me think of something from the book:

"Dema will grow full and absorb the light until Kala becomes the shadow. Then both will merge for a brief span. In doing so, they will glow like red crystal in the sky. Only every three hundred annum does this alignment of Tareth's moons occur. Some consider it an omen of war."

Thought I'd share. Xp

This was beautiful SS!
<3


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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No, that was beautiful! What

No, that was beautiful! What book is that? send me details plz! Thank you my lovely onyx whirl! ;D hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Just one of those romantic nothings I downloaded. ^.^ lol.

http://www.valorebooks.com/textbooks/gemini-moon/9781893896574?utm_mediu...


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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Divine! XD

Divine! XD


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

ashes_theartofburning's picture

Not as..

divine as your writings.
I really do love this.
Strike me SS,
your words are like lightning. <3


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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Awe shucks! Thanks bia! ;D

Awe shucks! Thanks bia! ;D


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Gorgeous

This is so beautiful, I adore it - one of your very best!

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Oh my! Thankyou dear Kerry!

Oh my! Thankyou dear Kerry! I'm beaming! Hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."