Senseless

A tangled mess of thoughts
A half-breath refusing to go deeper
Twisted decisions smack my face
Lost, listless, floating in a maze of obscurity
Lost hope feigning opportunity.
Big lies and small truths
Canyons of invisible trouble
That falling sinking feeling
Broken on the edge ready to float down
Abyss calls
No sense
Loud cracks permeate nothingness
The echoes of terror
All
Gone
Faded
I blinked
Life changed.

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INKSTAIN's picture

A very strong piece.

A very strong piece.

RoC's picture

Seems like...

you've had an aHa moment too.
Savor every moment you have, if change happens, it happens. We cannot shy away or attempt to avoid it, because that only induces the fear of change itself...
Embrace the unknown, my dear ssmoothie. The world wouldn't move forward without it.


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

mrpoofs's picture

Well damn. Look at you being

Well damn. Look at you being all melancholy and shit. This is a bit different from your usual sentiments to say the least, but a powerful write nonetheless. Keep on being awesome

SSmoothie's picture

Thanks ;) hugss you keep on

Thanks ;) hugss you keep on being awesome too! Cheering me up like that, who do you think I am? ;) lol!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

mrpoofs's picture

Lol honestly i do not know.

Lol honestly i do not know. But id like to

Diamond_Wills_New_War's picture

How quickly things change.

How quickly things change. One moment everything is fine the next everything is wrong and you're left just trying to make sense of it all.

Nice write. Enjoyed it.


Long days and pleasant nights

Diamond

SSmoothie's picture

Yes. I totally agree with

Yes. I totally agree with what you've said here. I am always worried that I won't be there for my kids or how the game changes so quickly... Scary time dear diamond, scary times... HugSAs


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."