Falling stars, and the light in your eyes

The hunger of you pervades my soul
Like a fire needing more air
Such a dark and desolate scape
With out your warming fire
The stars do their best
to capture the twinkle
lost in my eyes.
Riding the night sky
They fall at my feet
A blanket of stardust
And I feel nothing.
And yet I try.
The loss of you
Has made my bones dry
The marrow of my soul
Out of reach
The spark of your presence
Is lacking,
Oh so desperately lacking...
All the memories since creation
Do nothing but plant me further
Into the depths of despair
No star will ever twinkle
as bright as your eyes in mine
Only Venus comes close
But mars ever glows with warning
as fate conspires
To keeps us apart.

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<3 xo

<3 xo


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

RoC's picture

All the puzzle pieces

eventually fall into their rightful place
As time moves on and slowly ticks away
Forever, it seems, to go through every day
Knowing the closest is the furthest away

...beautifully tragic.


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Thanks Roc, you put it so

Thanks Roc, you put it so well, beautifully tragic! I think I've written a poem called that this comment must have inspired it! Hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Morningglory's picture

This is beautiful ssmoothie.

This is beautiful ssmoothie.


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Thank you so much my little

Thank you so much my little healing sprite hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Love this one. ~xkissesx

Love this one. ~xkissesx


"For ever on resounding, and knowing nought of time, our laws but catch the music of its eternal chime" - It Sounds Along the Ages by William Channing Gannett

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Thanks :) nice to hear, I

Thanks :) nice to hear, I hope you're not feeling something similar, it can be tough.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."