Wicked ways

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Slip away with me on the low tide
to the island of our hope
Let the sea wash away the tracks of our love
come with me to find our souls sanity one last time
Lets take the apple and devour all our chances
Come what may, I am destroyed
there is nothing You have not pervaded,
nothing without the wanting of you exists
There is only my sweet resigning to damnation
through your wicked ways

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raeleyn's picture

Ah-mazing!

I immediately felt something inside me when I read the first line and felt it all the way through. I was literally sucked in and visualized every line. It reminded me of my first love. It's great to read a piece that makes me feel something and I'm able to relate to. Kudos to you :)


Raeleyn S.

SSmoothie's picture

Why thankyou! I have enjoyed

Why thankyou! I have enjoyed the same feeling reading some of yours! Nice to see you back raeleyn! :) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Beavis's picture

Bravo!

I kneel to kiss your hand!

SSmoothie's picture

awe!!!!!!!!!! B!!!!! you are

awe!!!!!!!!!! B!!!!! you are a darling you make my jeart skip a beat with the thought of the flutter of your lips gracing these hands!!!! hugSSS mwah!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Moonshadow's picture

Oomph love this! Fantastic

Oomph love this! Fantastic write SSmoothie!!


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

SSmoothie's picture

Thankyou MS hugSS

Thankyou MS hugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Fitzgerald's picture

Ohh This is good SS, this is

Ohh This is good SS, this is really good! Flows perfect and sticks in my mind.

SSmoothie's picture

Well, if it fits ;) thanks

Well, if it fits ;) thanks Fitzy HugSS you made my day!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

allets's picture

Well!

...You've just got to change your evil ways, but without losing all the freedom and fun, of course. Scathing write! Full of fire - good wishes, allets


 

 

SSmoothie's picture

How true allets! :)

How true allets! :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."