Come get me from myself!

come get me from myself!!
I am too far down to climb back out
I will tear off this pleasant face
I will cut out the pain again and again
lost to the lilting crazy of me
Shhh! dont want it
Shhh! cant hear it
Shhh! I want to hear my death
time for another resurection
if you dont hurry doom!
I fear I wont survive
anther one so soon
shhh! dont speak
shhh! dont make noise
shhh! come get me
I dont want to do it
all by myself again.

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AHHHHHGG!!! Come Get Me!!!!!!

AHHHHHGG!!! Come Get Me!!!!!!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Beavis's picture

Simply brilliant!

Simply brilliant!

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Aww, thankyou so much beaves!

Aww, thankyou so much beaves! You always brighten my day beyond golden! ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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I have to read this really

I have to read this really fast.
The way you wrote it fits better to me that way.
Adds that panicky feel to it.
Greát job.
^_^


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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any way you want it!

its what ever you need it to be after I write it. the reader's choice of comprehension, metaphore, rhythm and cadence. :) such is the nature of art!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

running_with_rabbits's picture

smoothie I do not know what

smoothie I do not know what is wrong with me but I cannot for the life of me get in-tune with deep sorrow
I read that and I felt nothing, the last two lines I can relate to and mentally I know this but emotionally I just felt not even numb or exhausted, not even hollow just indifferent :( I think I am broken, I had a bubble bath today, tried to cry over my most recent loss, NOTHING

come and get me from me my dear!


Much Love

Ashley

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to be honest Iam an ice queen

to be honest Iam an ice queen I dont feel too much either... I wrote it as numb as you feel I keep hoping one day I will come alive with my own feeling not everyone elses implied. so deep sorrow never been there. I only know coping with fucked up. I tell you what I'll come get you, and you come get me ok? maybe then we will feel something different. tight hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

running_with_rabbits's picture

hmmm perhaps you did get the

hmmm perhaps you did get the feeling across then if I was numb reading and you were numb writing

and deal lets get each other


Much Love

Ashley

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deal!

you know im here for ya!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

running_with_rabbits's picture

ditto

ditto


Much Love

Ashley