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OBSERVATIONS... I'm tired of the way you love me
I want to be loved the right way
I don't want to make do or
keep making excuses for you
Ive tried and I've tried to bring it back
Every time your scraps come too late
I didnt think I'd have to but
I guess you can fight fate
I've been fighting it for years
The end came when your tender
Sweet passionate heartfelt kiss
was too damn hard to return
And I sit here for a thousand reasons...
Not one if them seems good enough right now
So Consider it an act of treason
I don't care there's one who loves me
Whether I'm here or there,
And it is this precious thought
that keeps me sane
Loving me the right way
time and time again
I want to be there
in all the right ways
So tell me why am I still here?
The answer is so clear
I can't do anything
The right way.
Great poem!
Great poem! Loved it ;-)
Aww! Beaves! You make me
Aww! Beaves! You make me chuckle like a young kid! ;P
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I love this one SS. Excellent
I love this one SS. Excellent write.
Thankyou Fitzy! Been a while
Thankyou Fitzy! Been a while since I wrote a solid one ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
nice work
I dread that situation in a future relationship, but I imagine it's probably a common aspect of most relationships, and how the relationship endures such a trial is what's important...or maybe it's only common in the wrong relationships...
Lol! JOE your comment
Lol! JOE your comment intrigued me! no matter who you are with if you like them you will stay through all the ffirery passionate fights and cold couldnt give a shit - till someone else is tending your shit etc. its always a rollercoaster and I wouldnt have it any other way life would be boring and youd just take eachother totallyfor granted! beside a little competition is always a good thing! Cheers SS!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
right way... um...
And how many of us do actually do anything the right way with someone else? Very arresting write! A lot to think about here! Cheers ") MS
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow