A Call to Passion

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Soul mates

I feel the fire in your hands
Burn before you even touch me

I feel the depth of your unspoken words
Before they hit me and pull another's love aside

I burn for you,
a blue flame of discontentedness

I melt with you
Into oily silky velvety fuild

It seeps in through my heart
And stains my soul vibrant colours then black.

You are a vampire of Passion
And I a victim of lust

Lost to the hypnotic call of an ancient
Vow which desolates for all ages to come,
my eternal now.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is a very special poem for me it denotes a slight break of freedom from something I ponder everyday. I am getting healthier everyday! :) save for some kidney and diabetes troubles ;) cant have it all! that would be boring, nothing to wish for or work for!

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necahuatl's picture

Vampire Addict

I have always loved the dark passion of the Vampire, the taboo of it all! This was like water to me on a hot humid summer day and I needed a cool tall glass of it to quench my thirst! Thank you! Very well done!


A Loud Mouth Chicana who has something to say!

SSmoothie's picture

thanks necahuati! ;)

I love your user pic its awesome and I've told you before but reading your poem again it s spectacular rather than just lovely, I mist have been in a dull mood! I'm book marking it! thanks for the reminder! Kind regards SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

SSmoothie's picture

why Thankyou PWings! ;) hugss

why Thankyou PWings! ;) hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Beavis's picture

Great poem!

Once again, you are on fire! "I melt with you / into oily silky velvety fluid" Priceless!!!

SSmoothie's picture

Thanks beaves I that line in

Thanks beaves I that line in particular I had a switcherooney after I realised I switch words as well as letter which you have helped me see! Your tricks certainly work, got me reading even more carefully, dyslexic, I put the sexy in it ! Lol ;P


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Beavis's picture

Indeed you did!!!

Indeed you did!!!

SSmoothie's picture

AWW! BLUSH!!!

AWW! BLUSH!!!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

LoveMe93's picture

Love it.

It's so descriptive and a great read.

SSmoothie's picture

oops! i just redited it!,

I hope its still ok!? Thanks cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

LoveMe93's picture

It's perfect.

It's perfect.

SSmoothie's picture

Thanks ;) HugSS

Thanks ;) HugSS .


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am