you make my poetry suck!

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You make my poetry suck!
I turn into a gibbering fool
Glib goes out the window
My best words go begging
Greatest works in the making
But your a tool for my foolery
Gobbledegook is all I can muster
Even now as I think I hold the right keys
To tell the truth you intimidate me
You have the power to make me look a fool
And what really kills is I chose you
Bloody auto correct and your psychicless
Bff text predict you make my poetry suck
and make me look like a Dick!

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Auto correct... incoorecto

Auto correct... incoorecto 1st world problems! Lol! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Daniel-59's picture

Look My Dear ! No One could

Look My Dear ! No One could make Your poetry suck. 

Your one of the ones who taught Me what little I know!


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

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Yeah true twsted bro! So

Yeah true twsted bro! So jappy to see you on!  ← see my jappy lol Happy I meant happy! Hope things are goid us fighters gotta keep fighting eh? Hugss xo 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

thisisme789's picture

LMAO!!

XDDD I love this!! It's awsome! Wow girlie! And you? Writting Gibberish? Riiight! Even if you do, no one else can tell! Your poems are awsome!


<3

SSmoothie's picture

Bahahahahaha ha ha ha ha!!!!

Bahahahahaha ha ha ha ha!!!!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

facethetruth2b's picture

You a gibbering fool ? I beg

You a gibbering fool ? I beg to differ .... I love your poetry , the way you write , everything you have to say .....And I do not picture you in the shape of a Dick .... PMSL..


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

SSmoothie's picture

PAMP!!! You're hillarious

PAMP!!! You're hillarious that's why I appreciate you and please rest assured I do not likened you to an image of a Dick! ;) lol love ya! Ps every Dick has its moment I can be a fan... I apreciate ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

SSmoothie's picture

U know pampered was supposed

U know pampered was supposed to be PSML!! SEE I SOUND LIKE DICK WITH IS AUTO CORRECT TEXT PREDICT HTC PHONE! GRRRRRR! LOL !


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

facethetruth2b's picture

Damn you Auto correct , you

Damn you Auto correct , you should see that website HILARIOUS...


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

SSmoothie's picture

Lol hillarious thanks! We

Lol hillarious thanks! We should all be responsible poets and be aware of this issue! Go and check it out y'all! Now! ;) thanks FTT2B !


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

SSmoothie's picture

Lol hillarious thanks! We

Lol hillarious thanks! We should all be responsible poets and be aware of this issue! Go and check it out y'all! Now! ;) thanks FTT2B !


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

thisisme789's picture

you're doing this on your

you're doing this on your phone?! That's awsome! and what's PSML mean??? I know that this makes me seem soooo out of the "txt language"...


<3

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FARRRRRQ

AND PAMPERED WAS SUPPOSED TO BE "PAMP" FAR OUT!!! :$


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

running_with_rabbits's picture

the only poem I have ever

the only poem I have ever read by you that sucks is this one and it sucks because it claims that your poetry sucks!

just sayin ;)


Much Love

Ashley

SSmoothie's picture

Love ya ash! And furry I want

Love ya ash! And furry I want to move there! ;) furry is supposed to be Durry see! Darn auto correct!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

running_with_rabbits's picture

love ya too! and your writing

love ya too! and your writing ;)


Much Love

Ashley

Adam아담's picture

lol... hmm, but yours is

lol... hmm, but yours is unique, and no one does it like you. Maintain this niche, educate, expand, experiment - and you will grow to be a better poet and a writer. You have something your poetry that I do not.


Cheers,
Adam_San

Adam아담's picture

You are a philosopher, and if

You are a philosopher, and if people take the time to read your poetry, right or wrong, they begin to more so learn, think, question, debate. Your poetry isn't static, no it is engaging.


Cheers,
Adam_San

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Thanks adamsan I think your

Thanks adamsan I think your wonderful and a fine example! HugSS o


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."