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Theories On My Relativity.
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PHILOSOPHICAL SS is ever the victim haled perpetraitor?
is there never an acceptance on ones facts alone
must we endeavor to prove what is unproven?
where will all this folly end?
the tyrants in our minds refuse to let us see our own'
lest we break bread with our troubles and feast and
gorge on the worthiest of wine like unworthy swine
will it be a partake of flesh or sound mind?
Spoiled cheese cloth bound softened by uncessary blows
Recant the the words of my truths I can not. will not.
suffer I will gravely insulted by further justifications
required in burdens of truth not mine to bear; I bear.
break my bones grind my truths to dusts do what you want with them
for me they niether a must nor a confirmation. I need my truths not.
Quickly is abandoned what is hard to understand but I will not run
I will not hide I know the knowing being where it resides;
fear it like I revere it and fear it not by known by consequence alone
Writings in the sky with the forgotten eye saw displaced with object relativities
what do I care if I my journey offends you; You will cross my path
and respectfully I will let you pass. Will you return the same or fear wrath?
whats in a name that does not bare a name. its name does not exist
only its reason shall i be permit to understand the whys and wherefores
and you may choose to go on oblivious to what I will know as truths with all sides
I will not forsake any who require the burden of proof to be mine.
They must simply accept I have none. Just a language with no sound.
Down-to-earth and Solid!
True indeed, "the tyrants in our minds refuse to let us see our own/ lest we break bread with our troubles and feast and/ gorge on the worthiest of wines." Often we must face our own "tyrants" inside and make peace and get to know them for our own good.
I like the straightforward manner of stating often unsavory facts. Truth comes not always soft but often as a blow to wake us up. Down-to-earth and solid! One of the many ideas worth reflecting on in your poem. Thanks for sharing!
Thankyou I really enjoyed reading your opinions on this work
You have a very interesting way of responding to poetry I really enjoy reading all of your comments on the site. I think you take a lot of care in them and I really appreciate that immensely. thankyou for highlighting some very important attributes of this poem Warm Regards SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Trying to read into it , and
Trying to read into it , and yes it has my brain hurting some ..Love the part that you say "What do I care If my journey offends you" Our journey may offend some but it is our journey we must complete alone ...And we shall let anyone in our path pass along the way with no problems ... If you cross my path it is up to you which way you want to take , to corss me and suffer wrath or simply pass by with peace...
you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......
Ooooh youre GOOD FTT2B!!!
yes definately theres a few different overlapping layers in there to do with spirituality and time and other bigger concepts but they pale in comparason with my little happy dance only I do not strike rather I make realise. it is not a reference to my wrath alone :) but it all measures out in the end . a karmic message perhaps? love reading what you have to say! :) HugSSis
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."