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Forsaken
why do you forsake me?
for this minute, this hour
or these days lasted
of your one second
rejection. Cruel and callous
frozen ice would have been
better on your lips at least
it could be stuck joined
and melding warmly defrosting
your indifference.
Hold yourself from me
I'll wait another eternity
for you to miSS me,
my heat and coital
validations and you will again
be mine till the next end of days.
Nice poem!
you go SS! I love how in your poems, when you can and/or want to, you change the double S's in the words, to be your username initials! It's cute, and very unique!
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yes I do that when I want to make a point ;)
if and when you see it, that line has a special relevance :) SSmarty, if you could SSee Me now youd SSee me nodding... ;P CHeerSS!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Lol, So what's the special
Lol, So what's the special relevance in this poem with the miSS ?
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miss SS figure it out...
This poem is actually about me. :)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
oh... lol, sort of confusing
oh... lol, sort of confusing XD . So when you do something like "for you to miSS me," do you mean for us to read it as miss me, along with miss SS?
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yes and no lol
its a little quirk i have developed over the years so read it as you like my poems are there to read and interpret as you see fit I can not see or understand for you I can only guide you. Cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Lol, Okay Miss SS! =P
Lol, Okay Miss SS! =P
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