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Pickled thoughts.

A jar of pickles
A jar of thoughts
Picked thoughts
Jarred while
Hearts ajar
Waiting for
someone else
Jarred jaw
Keeping the lid
on it jarring
Keeping to myself
Jammed shut
My mouth,
My words,
my soul
In a pickle
In a jar
Ajar
Full Of
Pickled thoughts.

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last updated 10 March 2012 - 12:50am
©10 March 2012 - 12:46am — SSmoothie
11 March 2012 - 12:18am — kerry
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Love this

how you play with words - delightful :)

kerry

 

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11 March 2012 - 1:29am — SSmoothie
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Thanks Kerry, I do love to

Thanks Kerry,
I do love to milk the words and situation, for this once I feel I didn't take too far but far enough :) thanks for reading and letting me know warm regards SS

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

10 March 2012 - 9:27am — snhobo
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well

HA! i see what you did thier.

It's last life is spent tormenting your dreams-zombie cat