jaded little pills

Bring back the days
before the quick pill daze.
When life was crueler and kinder
in the simplest of ways
You didn't have to worry so much
a smile was the first resort
Now it's a decisive threat
for swindle or retort.
The world is muddied up hazy,
and it by one's self can't change it
As long as people are weak
there's no hope of what I speak
I don't take pills to cure my ills
except the most common type
For fever and pain
I don't care what you say if it's all hype
The world stuffed up
because we all choose this way,
Do Easy crap and prefer not to think
and to stay that way
Not me, I'm up for a nice change.
Love and peace are Not just
hippy antics. Give them more respect!
those of you who toss it in
like a used wrapper
Near enough has never been
good enough
So get off your asses
and do something
to make a change in it
and while you're doing that
chances are love and peace
will pay you a fine visit!
Pity you don't know their real value...
If you did, you'd try.
Go on swallow.
Another jaded pill...

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MatthewWayne's picture

loved it!! very nice flow to

loved it!! very nice flow to it


"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne

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Wow! From you that made my day! :D

Beaming thanks Damien there's one slight correction needed though ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

snhobo's picture

well

kinda makes me guilty for haveing it so easy sometimes ...damn you for well writ poems.


It's last life is spent tormenting your dreams-zombie cat

SSmoothie's picture

You aNd I both know this poem

You aNd I both know this poem needs a lot of work! :P


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

hurtandlost's picture

well said!:)

well said!:)

SSmoothie's picture

:)

Thank you very much!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."