What can I do?

What can I do?
There is none else to love you.
Who will love you when I'm gone?
Who will forgive your childish ways?
Who will bring your passion to life?
Who will your elixir be?
Who will trample on me?
What can I do?
There is none else to love you.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Lovingly corrected by snhobo...

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Yes I had that same niggle so thanks

Its done :D yeahy another well written poem corrected by FIGJAMS ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

snhobo's picture

well

hey cap that "who" i know im getting picky now lol


It's last life is spent tormenting your dreams-zombie cat

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Sorry sir!

Yes sir!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

snhobo's picture

well

i like the way this one reads i would take out the "and" in line seven though. keep makinge me smile ss


It's last life is spent tormenting your dreams-zombie cat