Droplets of Brilliance

Silence is golden.
Ignorance is bliss.

In the patter of rain
I hear thumping
and hiss.
Droplets of brilliance
In oceans of rain.

Love lifts you up,
Thump!
Passion let's you down,
Hiss!
Rebuttal is butted,
Drip!
Refusal is quit,
Mist.

I see through it.
I hear over it.
It's under my skin.
It stains, it Maims.
It misses, it muses.
It riddles, it fiddles
With your brain.

Droplets of brilliance
In oceans of ordinary
Droplets of rain.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Figure this one out...

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snhobo's picture

O-o

am i the only one who reads between the lines in you words anyway great job and fyb


It's last life is spent tormenting your dreams-zombie cat

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Haha! Nice crowd!

Hey peeps!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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AWWWW! So many great works so

AWWWW! So many great works so little time, I am going away but will check in from time to time. Stay brilliant I love your art! Cheers and Hugs SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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lovely

i cannot stop reading this ;)

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You are all talented and salt

You are all talented and salt and peppered to taste with chilly, vanilla and saffron and other thing mixed in for measure, stay beautiful and true to your art this was about all of you and your beautiful hearts see you all later hugs SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Oops slight corrections - he

Oops slight corrections - he he...


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Becky's picture

I love this one, SS!

I love this one, SS!


~ Becky

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Thanks Becky, I love your

Thanks Becky, I love your droplets too ;)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Like This Idea

Oceans of ordinary...I am an intellectual Fascist...no mind left behind. Heaven defined as everyone all knowing - information as truth a perpetual goal. Now all needed is to teach readers to read and the illiterate to be perpetually reading. What a world that would be. ~ Lady A -