Well...

Draw upon me 

And here's some more 

Take it all,

Each cool drink of comfort 

Rest,

Respite 

Pull the cord tight 

Ill keep coming 

Ill keep running 

Always in the fight 

Draw upon me 

There's not too much left 

More 

Never sure if it fills again 

But some how it must be this 

The mire I give the more I get 

The more you take 

The less I regret 

Because I'm moving mountains in your honour 

I never knew I could 

Till I had not much left 

And more was needed 

And well...

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Takers show you how far you can go,

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You discovered the marvelous

You discovered the marvelous paradox, the abundance code, the gateway to reaching your full potential, and I love how you expressed it with casual authenticity and your sharp, natural flair. A life-altering formula poured so gracefully and cleverly and convincingly into my head that I felt a rush of positive energy and an exciting realization:

 

The universe gives refills! Yes, it is unlimited!

 

"Because I'm moving mountains in your honour"

Now that's a brilliant poem within a poem.

 

Your post is an enjoyable jolt of motivation. Very nice!