I've got into your poetry

Folder: 
FUN STUFF!

the free verse influence is clear

ive broken some conventions and made new styles appear

I've written for miles 

ive written for smiles

ive written drama 

and put out good and bad karma which is not a part of my religion 

and never in name but in the profound depictions  

ive composed unique forms of descriptions

ive brought traditional rhyme then stomped on its head

ive made up new words, brought back old

and I've seen pieces of me in things I've read 

glad to be of service 

and of course an inspiration 

though no one likes to hear it from a cocky cunt 

or even have the realization 

happy coincidences to you 

who think the way I do 

we really are a clever bunch 

Trail Blazers marking popular paths.

you don't have to say thanks 

it's all part of the great service. 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Ever get the feeling they never give you credit for anything? Lol who cares.

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darkpool's picture

Oh but I'll say thanks to you

Oh but I'll say thanks to you for entertaining me with your witty turn of phrase. 

allets's picture

If I Had Written This

I would post it under "Poetically Speaking". Bravo write. It is what we do alright. :D



Onyamaichi

 

Cascade's picture

I see a lot of raw food in

I see a lot of raw food in your talent. Raw is nutritional. I'm a nutritionalist. Digging in Smile

SSmoothie's picture

Ha ha good old wholesome

Ha ha good old wholesome value thats me fuck yeah! ;) cheerss


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Morningglory's picture

Well

If they give you no credit, I shall. As you have been a real inspiration to me.


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Awww bless! I say the same

Awww bless! I say the same about you and you have one of my all time favourite poems! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

word_man's picture

some thoughts to ponder

some thoughts to ponder


ron parrish

SSmoothie's picture

We see much of ourselves in

We see much of ourselves in eachothers poetry 

the life off a human is very much a stock standard in some aspects. don't take it too seriously :) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

word_man's picture

and it`s usually the love

and it`s usually the love part of our lives,or the lack of it


ron parrish

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Very true i agree! 

Very true i agree! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am