the weeping ghosts

 

The old violin was happy

when

the cello was joyous

 

The luscious notes of these

companions,

always played together

 

Like wild ghosts

it made us dance across the stars

 

like wild ghosts… like wild ghosts… like wild ghosts

we danced across the stars

 

But the old symphony

broke apart,

 

and the ghosts went their way… and danced no more

 

Off they went, each ghost to its corner…

 

to weep at the loss

 

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This is like an epic poem

This is like an epic poem compressed into a very small space, and that is a great talent to have.  The ancient poet, Callmiachus, said that a big poem was a big headache; the twentieth century poet, J. V. Cunningham, made a most admirable literary career on that premise; and you are continuing the grand tradition in a major way.  I applaud your poem and the talent that brought it into existence.


J-Called

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Sometimes

Sometimes I get in the habit of compression. But I don’t want to get too overly reliant on it, as I sometimes do. I still find great joy, sitting with something for weeks, months or years – and just letting it ruminate and ferment. Or until I’ve gotten to the right place in my life, to say it properly. And sometimes, that requires letting yourself age too.

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Can't help but say it

Hauntingly beautiful. Bittersweet, yet as winter pays for summer, it seems tears are sown to joy. Summer returns, ever again, though.

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The Cycles of Time

There is always the great renewal of cycles, and so many cycles there are – both big and small – across our own lifetimes and beyond.