The night was hot like teapots
roasted
on an open fire
and we drank the heat under the stars
in the old 57
Bel Air convertible
while a storm rolled across the valley
and drenched us
to the bone
but neither did we fear lightning bolts
or rain,
because we both knew, that
one day we would die
and that was reason enough, to continue
making love
in the whirling wind of a storm
and to fill our souls with happiness
and smiles,
whenever we would meet thereafter
and at your sister's wedding, on the stone bench
in the garden
you said,
"It was the best-est summer of all summers."
and there we were, at the edge of another
dark forest,
still holding hands
still smiling, like it was yesterday
our souls, consumed by ancient stars
still lost
in the cavernous reach
of smiles
and as the wedding guests stumbled away
in the warm
August light, of a waning crescent moon
the undaunted pleasure of touch
returned,
with that exquisite look of charm
on your face
and the glorious way, you always wore red
when starting over
that always made me kneel like a little
boy, and say amen
and i rediscovered the magic secret
of your eyes,
and traced your hips, with roaring happiness
and so, as old
we took
a midnight swim
the water of past and future, clashing
against our chest,
in the vastness of the lake
leaving little room, but labored sighs
and blissful
August happiness
and in the dusky light of the boathouse
beneath, the crescent moon
we fell in love again
but this time, I made a promise
to god
and the stars
and the dusky August moon
to never walk away
because I knew in my soul
that you,
were the life-giving balm of my life
the one true balm, that always made me happy
and I knew, from that moment
I'd never
be any good, at living without you
because I'm happy to disappear
elegantly, inside of you
with no recollection
of who I am
without you.
~/~
still a mew escapes
This is a lovely poem. Thanks for bring me back to it.
Debbie
I have come back to this poem
I have come back to this poem again, to marvel at the fabulous way it harnesses emotion, especially at the final lines.
J-Called
Just can't keep from
Just can't keep from revisiting this poem from time to time.
J-Called
Not A Fan Of Love Poems
Usually mushy and full of cliches and sentiment. Full spectrum writing apologizes to no other artform, when emotion floats from the images lightly and takes the reader into a moment of suspension of disbelief. Just the right proportions of empathy to objectivity ratios - rare and in this case, enrapturingly human. :D
Reading this about twenty-two
Reading this about twenty-two months since my previous read, I find it even more powerful. This is the kind of poem that, as I age, unfolds more and more of itself as, at at the pace of which, I can appreciate it.
J-Called
seeing it new
Sometimes things vary in the way they unfold over time. Life can be funny like that. Like rereading a book you read ten years ago – but seeing it all different now.
I should send you a bill for
I should send you a bill for the breath that your poem just took away from me. Wow! This is one of the most evocative poems I have read in a long time. Every image, every emotion, was crystal clear, resonating in its language as the poem moved---and it does move, it is not static---before my eyes. This is a great poem, but the talent implied behind it is even greater.
J-Called
Oh My
This made me mew like a kitten. Beautifully spoken. I had to read to the end compellingly to hear its ending.