consumed by ancient stars

 

The night was hot like teapots

roasted

on an open fire

 

and we drank the heat under the stars

in the old 57

Bel Air convertible

 

while a storm rolled across the valley

and drenched us

to the bone

 

but neither did we fear lightning bolts

or rain,

because we both knew, that

one day we would die

 

and that was reason enough, to continue

making love

in the whirling wind of a storm

 

and to fill our souls with happiness

and smiles,

whenever we would meet thereafter

 

and at your sister's wedding, on the stone bench

in the garden

you said,

"It was the best-est summer of all summers."

 

and there we were, at the edge of another

dark forest,

still holding hands

still smiling, like it was yesterday

 

our souls, consumed by ancient stars

still lost

in the cavernous reach

of smiles

 

and as the wedding guests stumbled away

in the warm

August light, of a waning crescent moon

 

the undaunted pleasure of touch

returned,

with that exquisite look of charm

on your face

 

and the glorious way, you always wore red

when starting over

that always made me kneel like a little

boy, and say amen

 

and i rediscovered the magic secret

of your eyes,

and traced your hips, with roaring happiness

 

and so, as old

we took

a midnight swim

 

the water of past and future, clashing

against our chest,

in the vastness of the lake

 

leaving little room, but labored sighs

and blissful

August happiness

 

and in the dusky light of the boathouse

beneath, the crescent moon

we fell in love again

 

but this time, I made a promise

to god

and the stars

and the dusky August moon

 

to never walk away

 

because I knew in my soul

that you,

were the life-giving balm of my life

 

the one true balm, that always made me happy

 

and I knew, from that moment

I'd never

be any good, at living without you

 

because I'm happy to disappear

elegantly, inside of you

 

with no recollection

of who I am

 

without you.

 

 

~/~

 


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djtj's picture

still a mew escapes

This is a lovely poem.  Thanks for bring me back to it.

Debbie

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I have come back to this poem

I have come back to this poem again, to marvel at the fabulous way it harnesses emotion, especially at the final lines.


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Just can't keep from

Just can't keep from revisiting this poem from time to time.


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Not A Fan Of Love Poems

Usually mushy and full of cliches and sentiment. Full spectrum writing apologizes to no other artform, when emotion floats from the images lightly and takes the reader into a moment of suspension of disbelief. Just the right proportions of empathy to objectivity ratios - rare and in this case, enrapturingly human. :D


 

 

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Reading this about twenty-two

Reading this about twenty-two months since my previous read, I find it even more powerful.  This is the kind of poem that, as I age, unfolds more and more of itself as, at at the pace of which, I can appreciate it.


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Spinoza's picture

seeing it new

 

Sometimes things vary in the way they unfold over time. Life can be funny like that. Like rereading a book you read ten years ago – but seeing it all different now.

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I should send you a bill for

I should send you a bill for the breath that your poem just took away from  me.  Wow!  This is one of the most evocative poems I have read in a long time.  Every image, every emotion, was crystal clear, resonating in its language as the poem moved---and it does move, it is not static---before my eyes.  This is a great poem, but the talent implied behind it is even greater.


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djtj's picture

Oh My

This made me mew like a kitten.  Beautifully spoken.  I had to read to the end compellingly to hear its ending.