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The Warm Shower Alone
I undressed and with a sigh
Always,always wondering why
Stepped into the shower alone
The warm water ran down my chest
Over and off the tip of my breast
And I watched this with my soul
Soap may cleanse my skin
But someone like me can never win
The war of the desires
Always tugging at my hearts needs
The conquerer ignores my pleas
And rides over me with his steed
Oh to drown and be done with it all
Then my soul will fly, not fall
I do not like the sound of this call
Water trickling down and out of sight
If only they could feel my plight
The ones who always want to fight
I want something I shall never obtain
Loneliness shall be snide and remain
To cause the heartbreak and the pain
No matter what I do
Hello
I can relate i have had some cyber relationships in the past that did not work out but now i am in one and he is a great guy that i have being talking to for 2 years now and its being good alot of my poems are about him. TERESA RIFE
i like this most:
"Oh to drown and be done with it all
Then my soul will fly, not fall
I do not like the sound of this call"
thanks for sharing
salam..
A cyber relationship?? what were you thinking??
Very visual, very well thought out. You have a gift of putting the reader into the moment and allowing them to relate. Excellent.
Erotic enjoyment? "Desire - A Chance Encounter" at postpoems.
Billy
Nice poem. You expressed yourself very well.
Save me from this swallowing drain,This septic nightmare!
Very good poem. I feel your pain. Well written. Great imagery. I just like this poem.
i really enjoyed this poem..i can relate to it..as i was in the position myself..it brought back a lot of memories..i wrote a poem about how ifelt at losing someone i loved..called tears..and i still think of him to this day..good work..liz.
hmm, I feel like this too often now, Always, ALWAYS fuckin getting into the shower alone, It's so peaceful in there. So warm, so friendly, so inviting, but without someone to share it with, it's so bleak and empty. and we all need compony, at least for a shower or two. :')
tyler