I've slept so long without
your touch
your smell
your eyelashes tickling my cheek
your lips
your arms
your breath on my face
your weight
your warmth
your dreams with mine
I've slept so long without
That it feels
I haven't slept at all
Ah this is nice! Apart from the dread of break-up, this reads very nicely with a good rhythm that carrries through the some said thoughts of loneliness and longing.
Nice work,
Richard.E.