If comfort is what I truly want,
Then why is destruction my only song?
It's spiraling, twisting, and decaying
Breaking away the haze I have placed
Everyone sees such brilliant love
Emanating within me from above
But dare they know the truth...
That I am ugly and obtuse
Strange in my want for wicked
Yearning for lust in exchange for sin
Banishing cries inside myself
To wander in abyss-forever left to reminisce
This beast raging and thrashing
Screaming your name which burns like lashes
My want is to sacrifice love
For chaos and passion in your arms
Please....please understand
This emerging wave of panic-
I can't contain it's mass
This enormous weight and force
Crushes the last of my soul
As it flattens and whispers remorse
As my conscience grieves for my mortal soul
Only a few moments pass
And my desire flares, bringing forth my passion
A very involved poem here;
A very involved poem here; you paint an excellent picture of your emotions and are quite vivid in descriptions; I like your poem a lot, thanks for sharing.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
Thank you! I appreciate you
Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read it :)
~Soul
You say it so well. When we
You say it so well. When we think we're somebody who is so saintly...we need to balance it out and show ourselves that really aren't anybody saintly. So acting unsaintly is just being authentic. Thanks for writing.
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
I love your imagery.
I love your imagery.
Thank you!
Thank you!
I appreciate that very much :)
~Soulstonic
Well so far, I freakin love
Well so far, I freakin love it! Yeah, I missed your works of art.
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Awww. You're words make me
Awww. You're words make me happy :)
I'm going to have to go through your writings! I haven't read them in a while and I want to catch up :)
~Soul
Warnig! There's a lot of
Warnig! There's a lot of crap! i recommend 'Windblown'
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