I meet you in a broken bar
You lay your pity on me
Lets go outside
Lets take a ride
I lay you on the cotton dress
And scent you with sweet sweat
Lets break the ice now
Let feed our emotions
Im inside you now
Your sweat smell is intense
Lets go harder baby
Lets go better baby
I feel your claws in my skin
The blood hits the sweat
Lets push harder now
Lets go faster
And finally the ecstacy hits
Your screams hit my skin
It's totally better now
It's so better now
And I've destroyed you now
You lay helpless and broken
Shall we go again
...Like you have a choice
YIPES! This poem was pretty good. At first I thought that it was consentual but that last sentence at the end really got me!
quite interesting side to write from. kudos, not many people have the guts to write from the rapists view point. it's a powerful poem, although, creepy, i must say, but well writtin. the last line makes the poem i think. really sums it up and adds a final cynical twist. keep writing.
what the fucking hell..