I saw the train coming closer
To pick me up and take me away
To a place I hadn't been before
Somewhere I wouldn't forget
And I hoped, oh hoped
That I would be their soon
The train stopped and I got on
But fear took me over
I looked at the faces in the seats
Each dark face reflecting
A universe of fear and hate
The chill biting me to the core
I approached a tormented seat
It's cloth hung with regret
Another stool dampened the air
It too filled with remorse
I sat on a patch of fear
and waiting for the train to move
Now my premonition begot with doubt
Rocking back and forth i sat
Swaying with the motion of the train
Feeling the troubled air between me
I was filled with alien emotions
But always hopefull for the stop
The ride rolls on forever
Time not wanting part of this heat
Distant eyes look over me
Some distant as the close horizon
Others near as the furthest hieght
I felt raped by the air
I can sense the voices now
Now so much heard but felt
Their hate and distress echoing
From every part of the cabin
I feel them prying my brain
And get closer, ever closer
They pry into my soul but I hold
My inner self not giving a blink
Harder and harder they try for me
I couldn't hold for much longer
Ever the battle going on and on
I hope eternity ends soon...
Now the train rides to a close
It's stop is not known by anyone
No-one got off, no-one got on
Not even me, I reached my stop before
Consumed by lost souls
Consumed by the Alien Emotions
this is really quite amazing. i love the way the stanzas flow but check the spelling of hEIght. i think you got the letters mixed in stanza five. i really like it though.