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Infatuation
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Love poems Is it love,
Or an obsession.
I think a fire burns within,
One I cannot extinguish.
I feel as if I cannot be complete,
Without you in my possesion.
Though that isn't love, in love you must be free,
And such freedom is my only wish.
Love sucks. Take it from one
Love sucks. Take it from one who knows only too well lately.
Sounds like a person who has
Sounds like a person who has never experienced love, or is confused by what they learned about love. "You complete me" is a romantic line used to twist the picure and provoke a delusion that it is impossible to be in love and feel whole without the other person. It's a lie a lot of people believe because it sounds good and it sells... don't be fooled, but your poem expresses the lie beautifully ;-)
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Thank you
Thank you
You're welcome. You have a
You're welcome. You have a knack for succinctness. It is a great quality for a writer to have.
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
What if both people feel that
What if both people feel that same way? Is it love, or mutual obsession?
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I think that might be mutual
I think that might be mutual obsession, but then agin I'm not too experienced with love
The last line, I think shows
The last line, I think shows love. Allowing and wishing for the freedom of another... letting them be who they are even if that means they will not be yours to keep. As I love, I love to the fullest, every moment of sharing with another being. That's what fills my spirit and my heart. But still, it's nice to have that romantic kind of spark with someone once in a while.. that's not love though that's just attraction.
I liked the write.
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