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Stained Glass
In through the night where tired eyes focus
and breathing becomes relaxed.
Desolate paths now surrounded by signs,
make my walk heavier, my direction much lighter.
Some lazy lush love sickness thickens the stains,
that were once thrown on the walls of these empty halls.
A suffer in silence distanced from years passed,
renews its light once again.
As with the light hitting every cut of this clear stone,
its vibe sends out an electric curse.
A spontaneous combustion of color meshes with time,
creating what you can't see.
Its warmth welcomes me with no ball and chain,
as I am a prisoner no more.
A lit candle sparks in a dark room where the doors remain unlocked
and the stained glass glows from your reflection.
My favorite of your writings!
My favorite of your writings!
i read this one several times
thank you for the inspiration! I haven't posted on this site for a long time or written for that matter. but your comments on my poem made me feel pretty good. I read through this one a bunch I loved it. your flow is musical. "Desolate paths now surrounded by signs, make my walk heavier, my direction much lighter." this line is beautifully sober. shit I had to re-read this line while I'm writing this...yup it gives me chills awesome!!!
Monkeyserm
Im glad that you know what inspires you. Thank you for your thoughts on the piece and everyone inspires someone in some way or another
Sonya
Beautifully written.
Highly impressive poetry. Beautifully written, and so delicately composed. I found this to be a truly moving and passionate write. One of the finer romantic poems I have read on this site in quite some time. Thanks for posting this quality work.
"A lit candle sparks in a dark room where the doors remain unlocked
and the stained glass glows from your reflection." - Captivating.
new_wave_franky
March 12, 2011.
Glad you enjoyed the piece.
Glad you enjoyed the piece. It brings me peace of mind and thank you for the critique
Sonya