I'm not that pretty
and i'm hardly skinny
My hair is too often a mess
and i'm never full of zest
I don't have an amazing smile
and I can't run an intire mile
My nails are always broke
and I can't tell good jokes
My breasts are imperfect and small
and my speech is overly flawed
My face is always tinted red
and getting too close to ppl I do dread
I have notably low self-esteem
and I don't have any life goals or dreams
I'm rarely valient
and I don't know where to my memory went
I don't have an extensive vocabulary
and I'm not known to be gleeful and merry
I have itty bitty ears
and I sometimes only hear what I want to hear
I'm slightly crazy
and really lazy
I have a whole lot of fears
and shead bunches of tears
I'm not mentally or physically strong
and I'm usually wrong
I can't do anything exceptionally well
and I don't believe in God, heaven or hell
I don't have gorgeous eyes
and it fills my head with "why"s
Why do you love someone like me?
I don't understand, it's a mystery
It's a nice idea, but all the forced rhymes ruin it. Don't let rhyming get in the way of writing a good poem.
its good its nice blah blah blah.. suck it up. life is tough, and we are fighting loosing battle, don't you know that we are all going to hell. Love?! yeah. you have a very nice poem,..
This person loves you because you can write like a demon and I bet you ARE beautiful! heh...
Good. Try getting them published. Like for money.
Very understandable...I can relate, for the most part...but, it's really good none the less...