Why do you love me? 6/14\02

I'm not that pretty

and i'm hardly skinny

My hair is too often a mess

and i'm never full of zest

I don't have an amazing smile

and I can't run an intire mile

My nails are always broke

and I can't tell good jokes

My breasts are imperfect and small

and my speech is overly flawed

My face is always tinted red

and getting too close to ppl I do dread

I have notably low self-esteem

and I don't have any life goals or dreams

I'm rarely valient

and I don't know where to my memory went

I don't have an extensive vocabulary

and I'm not known to be gleeful and merry

I have itty bitty ears

and I sometimes only hear what I want to hear

I'm slightly crazy

and really lazy

I have a whole lot of fears

and shead bunches of tears

I'm not mentally or physically strong

and I'm usually wrong

I can't do anything exceptionally well

and I don't believe in God, heaven or hell

I don't have gorgeous eyes

and it fills my head with "why"s

Why do you love someone like me?

I don't understand, it's a mystery

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pendersnatch's picture

It's a nice idea, but all the forced rhymes ruin it. Don't let rhyming get in the way of writing a good poem.

Evil Slayer's picture

its good its nice blah blah blah.. suck it up. life is tough, and we are fighting loosing battle, don't you know that we are all going to hell. Love?! yeah. you have a very nice poem,..

Nicole A.'s picture

This person loves you because you can write like a demon and I bet you ARE beautiful! heh...

bean's picture

Good. Try getting them published. Like for money.

Rebecca Moore's picture

Very understandable...I can relate, for the most part...but, it's really good none the less...