Not a freak

How can you just stand there and look at me?!!!!!!!

I'm not a freak, I'm just a girl

trying to fit in your world of perfectness.

The way you treat me is not fair,

but what would you know of fair?

You're just the person who has been ruining my life.

I can't believe we were friends once.

Fine, just stand there and stare,

you'll never amount to anything, but dirt!!!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Please tell me what you think of this poem. I need feedback on my work.

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Sarah Somebody's picture

I like this poem.

Being a 'freak' is okay.. hehe.. Well, what I'm trying to say is people shouldn't strive to be the same, be yourself, stand out.

-SaRaH-

Check, out my poems if you want. ;-)

Kayla Smolen's picture

*hey!* Thanks so much for commenting on my poem, "With You". I love the way you wrote this poem. You expresssed your feelings and you didn't sugarcoat anything. You're an awesome writer and I think you should continue to do so. *luv8 -ME- xoxo

Alexis Hunter's picture

interesting...i think i liked the other one better though, u have some talent chick, please id be honered if u read some of mine, thanx chika lata

Kaylee Chernoff's picture

Life will have its up and downs...And at somw points in our life hunni we all feel like freaks because of the way people mistreat us and just because its part of growing up.
This is an awesome poem...Kepp up the awesome writing.